homework

Hi Andy! 

Thank you so much for sending this in.

I appreciate all of your efforts. 

Kindly go over the corrections below. 

Enjoy your night and see you in class. ^.^   

Teacher Nina

i think that to be successful in the world, the most important skill is confidence.

>> Confidence is the most important attitude to be successful in the world.

>> OR: I think to be successful in the world, confidence is the key.

>> OR: The key to be successful is being confident.

the confidence help me to keep going.

>> Confidence helps me to go on in life.

>> OR: Confidence helps me to continue with my everyday activities.

although i have a failure, with confidence, i can overcome the failure.

>> Even if I commit mistakes, confidence helps me to overcome it.

>> OR: Even though I commit mistakes, being confident with the things that I do, it helps me to overcome it.

>> OR: Confidence helps me to be better even though I commit mistakes.

i think many great man must have had powerful a sense of confidence.

>> I think great men should be confident.

>> OR: I think a lot of great people is confident.

>> OR: I think many people are confident.