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2018-02-09 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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What do you think about the Military Alphabet? I think that the Military Alphabet is not economic. Because they are complicate. If I made the Military Alphabet,I will make it easier. A for alpha will change like A for Apple. Then people can memorize it easier.

강사 첨삭


Hi kid! Good afternoon!

Thanks for doing your homework. You have good reasoning skills. You certainly have a good head on your young shoulders. I love how your mind works. Great job!

See you tonight!

Cheers!

Amanda ^-^


What do you think about the Military Alphabet?


 I think that the Military Alphabet is not economic.  Because they are complicate.

>>  I think that the Military Alphabet is not practical because the words that represents each letter in the English alphabet are not widely known.


If I made the Military Alphabet,I will make it easier.

>> If I were to make another version of the Military Alphabet, I will make it easier.


 A for alpha will change like A for Apple. Then people can memorize it easier.

>> Instead of Alpha, I will use Apple to represent the letter A. This will make it easier for people to memorize.

 


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