homework
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강사 첨삭
How are you doing MISS [이름]!
You must be rushing when you did this. It\'s different from your typical essay-type answer.
I still commend you for taking the time to answer this. Thanks a lot!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
2/7 In some countries, there is an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children. What are the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children? .
Advantages
1. Children will make family happy and complited. They are lovely.
>>> Children will make the family happy and complete. They are lovely.
2. Childen will help and take care of their parents.
>>> Correct!
Disadvanages
>>> Disadvantages
1. To have a lot of responsibility
>>> Children can add to the responsibilities of the couple.
2. Need to spend a lot of money
>>> Raising children requires a lot of money.
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