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2018-02-12 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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2/6 Art is considered an essential part of all cultures all throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? I think both of them are great subjects. We can live without arts but it would be disaster without science. We are using science in a lot of lives. We cannot live without science. Science makes our lives better.It is helping us. Science makes our lives betterto live longer.

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2/6 Art is considered an essential part of all cultures all throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is?

I think both of them are great subjects.

>>> Correct!
 We can live without arts but it would be disaster without science.

>>> We can live without arts but it would be a disaster without science.

We are using science in a lot of lives. We cannot live without science.

>>> We are using science in different aspects of life. Therefore, I believe that we cannot live without it.
Science makes our lives better.

>>> Correct!

It is helping us. 

>>> Correct!
Science makes our lives betterto live longer.

>>> OR: Science also helps us live a comfortable and longer life.

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