homework
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The advantages of shopping online is that you don't have to go outside. You can be in your home and shop through technologies. The disadvantages of shopping online is that if you are buying clothes, you won't get the chance to wear it on before buying. And you won't get to exercise.
강사 첨삭
That was a short but concise essay [이름]!
Thanks for answering this homework.
I just hope that you keep writing longer essays.
See you tomorrow.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
The advantages of shopping online is that you don\'t have to go outside.
>>> Correct!
You can be in your home and shop through technologies.
>>> Correct!
The disadvantages of shopping online is that if you are buying clothes, you won\'t get the chance to wear it on before buying.
>>> Correct!
And you won\'t get to exercise.
>>> Correct!
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