homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I wish you can live there someday.
You belong there because you\'re also kind. ^^
Thank you for sharing.
See you tomorrow1
_Teacher Dianne ^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
** Describe your ideal town or city, why you would want to live there, and what you would do there.
>> correct
I want to live in Happy town.
>> correct
The Happy town is a small town,and all the Happy town\'s villigers are very kind.So,I want to live in Happy town.
>> The Happy town is a small town and all the villagers are very kind, so I want to live in Happy town.
>> Or: The Happy town is a small town and all the people in the village are very kind, so I want to live in Happy town.
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