homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름], thank you for taking time to write about your favorite teacher. You did an impressive job in describing her. I can understand why she\'s your favorite teacher. It would have been better if you wrote in a paragraph form. See you again in class!
~T. Rhea
My favorite teacher is Ahn Myoung Ja.
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She was my homeroom teacher when I was in the second grade.
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She taught us to understand easily.
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And she told us many interesting tales.
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>> She taught us to understand easily, and she told us many interesting tales.
Although she is disabled(She can use only an eye.), she always gave us good energy.
>>Although she is disabled (she can use only one eye), she always gave us good energy.
She retired last year so I am sad not to meet her.
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>>She retired last year, so I am sad not to see her anymore.
>>She retired last year, so I am sad not to have classes with her anymore.
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