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2018-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Rhea

학생이 쓴 원문

Who is your favorite teacher? What do you like about him/her? ================================================================ My favorite teacher is Ahn Myoung Ja. She was my homeroom teacher when I was in the second grade. She taught us to understand easily. And she told us many interesting tales. Although she is disabled(She can use only an eye.), she always gave us good energy. She retired last year so I am sad not to meet her. Have a happy day!!!!!(^v^)

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], thank you for taking time to write about your favorite teacher. You did an impressive job in describing her. I can understand why she\'s your favorite teacher. It would have been better if you wrote in a paragraph form. See you again in class!

~T. Rhea

My favorite teacher is Ahn Myoung Ja.

>>Correct
 She was my homeroom teacher when I was in the second grade.

>>Correct
 She taught us to understand easily.

>>Correct
 And she told us many interesting tales.

>>Correct

OR

>> She taught us to understand easily, and she told us many interesting tales.
 Although she is disabled(She can use only an eye.), she always gave us good energy.

>>Although she is disabled (she can use only one eye), she always gave us good energy.
 She retired last year so I am sad not to meet her.

>>Correct.

OR

>>She retired last year, so I am sad not to see her anymore.

>>She retired last year, so I am sad not to have classes with her anymore.


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