Homework (79)
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1. What are the things that can make you angry?
Boxing, my father, art classes can make me angry.
2. What would you do if your neighbors were noisy?
I will ignore them.
3. How do you find peace and quiet in a loud area?
If my neighbors are not fighting, then that area is a peace area.
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>>Boxing, my father, and art classes can make me angry.
I will ignore them.
I will ignore them.
>>CORRECT
If my neighbors are not fighting, then that area is a peace area.
If my neighbors are not fighting, then that area is a peace area.
>>If my neighbors are not fighting then that is peaceful for me.
OR>>As long as my neighbors are not fighting then that area is peaceful.
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