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Hello [이름]!!!!

Never regard study as a duty but as an enviable opportunity to learn and gain knowledge in English. If you do have the opportunity to move on with learning English make a step forward for you to develop your skills. This would give an overwhelming satisfaction in communicating with other people. 

T. Jeny

ESSAY: How important are books to you?
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I have well-known books are important to me having indirect experiences.

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 If I read a guide book for traveling, I might have known what I should be avoid when I am at other countries and what I must have to see there.
>> If I read a guide book for traveling, I would know what I should avoid when I am in another country and what must I see.
When I read literature books steadily, I will get some advanced vocabulary and it makes other person seeing me as an educated person.

>>When I continuously read books, I will learn some advanced words and it will make me look like an educated person.

Furthermore, it makes my sentence to be constructed well and my conversation to be rich.

>>Furthermore, I can create better sentences and improve my conservation skills.

Thus, the person who is talking with me might feel comfortable.
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If I read histories, I might realize why our life styles are being like that.

>>If I read the history book, I will understand every lifestyle.

And if I will realize the sign, I would know and avoid something bad time because I believe in histories are being repeated.
>>And I will learn about the signs then I will be knowledgeable on what to avoid because I believe that history repeats itself.
But, nowadays, I become to being lazy... I should recover my consciousness!!!

>>But I am becoming lazy nowadays, I should recover my consciousness!!!