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Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the question.

You are definitely right and I totally agree with you.

I hope that people will learn how to discipline themselves with the use of their smartphones.

Have a great day ahead!

_Teacher Dianne ^^

Do you think our society is too dependent on technology like smartphones? Why or why not? 

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I agree with that our society is too dependent on technology.

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It is clear that human beings are inseparably connected with technology, but since smartphones were invented we are too dependent on it.

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We check our smartphones for no purpose when we have a few moments.

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And we feel very anxiety if we left our smartphones at home or run out of batteries.

>> And we feel very anxious if we left our smartphones at home or ran out of batteries.

And a new word was appeared “Smombie” which is “Smartphone” plus “Zombie” means we use smartphones like zombie.

>> And a new word, “Smombie” was created which is the combination of the words “Smartphone” and “Zombie” that means we use smartphones like zombies.

Smombies around the world have various accidents every day, falling on the street, crashing into places, and falling into manholes.

>> Smombies around the world have various accidents every day, such as falling on the street, crashing into places, and falling into manholes.

It is true that Smartphones improve the quality of our life but It is also true that many people suffer from reckless and purposeless smartphone use.

>> It is true that smartphones improve the quality of our life, but it is also true that many people suffer from reckless and purposeless smartphone use.