homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Wow! I think that is a unique kind of restaurant.
Thank you for sharing about this.
I hope you can go there again soon.
Good night!
_Teacher Dianne
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
** Write about a restaurant you visited lately. Say something about it.
>> correct
I was visited nature river restaurant.
>> I visited the nature river restaurant.
The nature river restaurant is a meat food restaurant,and I can see a little park and parrots in that restaurant.
>> The nature river restaurant is a meat food restaurant and I can see a little park and parrots in that restaurant.
And,i can eat ice cream for free in that restaurant.So,I want to go to that restaurant again.
>> I can also eat ice cream for free in that restaurant, so I want to go to that restaurant again.
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