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2018-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Hello. Sharon. I\'m traveling in Philipines. Actually I\'m in Bohol now. This is a wonderful place to enjoy with my family. Today, I enjoy a ground tour that provide visiting the chocolate hills and watching tarsia monkeys, birds, butterflies. I have been satisfing this tour. Next week, I will attend our classes again. Have good time.

강사 첨삭

Hi Allen!

It\'s so nice to hear from you.

Those are beautiful pictures!

It\'s like I\'m seeing my country for the first time.^^

It looks like you\'re having a good time.

Take care and I will see you soon!

Have fun!

I made some corrections below. Learning never stops.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I\'m traveling in Philipines.

>> I\'m traveling in the Philippines.
Actually I\'m in Bohol now.

>> Correct
This is a wonderful place to enjoy with my family.

>> Correct
Today, I enjoy a ground tour that provide visiting the chocolate hills and watching tarsia monkeys, birds, butterflies.

>> Today, I enjoyed a ground tour that included visiting the Chocolate Hills and seeing tarsiers, birds, and butterflies.
I have been satisfing this tour.

>> I have been very satisfied with the tour.
Next week, I will attend our classes again.

>> Correct
Have good time.

>>  Have a good time.

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