Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Allen!
It\'s so nice to hear from you.
Those are beautiful pictures!
It\'s like I\'m seeing my country for the first time.^^
It looks like you\'re having a good time.
Take care and I will see you soon!
Have fun!
I made some corrections below. Learning never stops.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I\'m traveling in Philipines.
>> I\'m traveling in the Philippines.
Actually I\'m in Bohol now.
>> Correct
This is a wonderful place to enjoy with my family.
>> Correct
Today, I enjoy a ground tour that provide visiting the chocolate hills and watching tarsia monkeys, birds, butterflies.
>> Today, I enjoyed a ground tour that included visiting the Chocolate Hills and seeing tarsiers, birds, and butterflies.
I have been satisfing this tour.
>> I have been very satisfied with the tour.
Next week, I will attend our classes again.
>> Correct
Have good time.
>> Have a good time.
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