homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Creative Essay:
What brings the most happiness: buying things or having experiences (good and bad)?
Sometimes i\'ve been bought something for me. but that\'s kind of happy in my life. the other day,
>> I bought something for myself the other day and it brings happiness in my life.
some friens and i went to an Indian restaurant and it was really good!
>> My friends and I went to an Indian restaurant and it was really good.
I mean,I\'ve been to Indian restaurants before,
>> I mean, I\'ve been to an Indian restaurant before,
what made this place especially better was. they showed us traditional way to eat the food, and i thought that was really fun.
>> But what made this place especially better was, they showed us the traditional way to eat the food and I thought it was really fun.
it was really nice to be able to experience their curture instead of just eating the food.
>> It was really nice to be able to experience their culture instead of just eating the food.
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