homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Describe a good citizen
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A good citizen should keep the law, take part in the election and protect the environment.
When I am an adult, I will try to be a good citizen.
I hope that there are a lot of good citizens in the world.
Have a nice day~!^^
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! What an excellent answer. I wish that many children think the way you do. After reading your answer, I thought that here\'s hope for the world\'s future after all. See you in class.
A good citizen should keep the law, take part in the election and protect the environment.
When I am an adult, I will try to be a good citizen.
>>When I will become an adult, I will try to be a good citizen.
I hope that there are a lot of good citizens in the world.
Have a nice day~!^^
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