Homework^^
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강사 첨삭
Hello dear. As always, you gave accurate answers. However, I\'d like to point out that neighborhood is not limited to your neighbors or the people living close to you. Neighborhood also pertains to the place where you live or your community. For example, you can say, \"There is a park five blocks away from my house to the left. It has swings and slides where children play on weekends. Right next to the park is a tennis court and a basketball court. What I like most though, are the colorful flowers planted strategically around the area and the tree line pathway going to the center of town.\" Thank you. See you in class [이름].
Two children that I know live in the upstairs.
>> Two children that I know live upstairs.
They are younger than me.
>> Two children that I know live upstairs.
>> Correct
I go to Taekwondo with them.
>> Correct
One is a 9 year old girl and the other is a 7 year old boy.
>> Correct
The girl gave me a bread shaped key ring.
>> The girl gave me a bread shaped like key ring.
>> The girl gave me a key-ring-shaped bread.
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