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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Greetings!
What a wonderful day! Thanks to your composition, James.
You know what, I was imagining your teacher really threw a book at you. lol My imagination has gone wild again. lol
But it\'s good that you\'ve been influenced positively. You\'re such a decent person.
Thanks for sharing this experience of yours! I wonder how that teacher of yours is doing. He must have helped so many people.
I hope you\'d inspire others with this story and more.
Thank you!
Have a good one!
-Klein
Why should someone throw the book at you?
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When I was young and I was in the high school, I had to study hard for entering the university.
>>Correct
OR >> When I was young and still in high school, I had to study hard for university admission.
At that time, I had to stay late at school and had to study hard for my life.
>>Correct
OR >> At that time, I had to stay late at school and study hard for my future.
But sometimes I felt that I was boring at studying.
>>But sometimes I felt that I was bored with studying.
So I skipped the studying and went somewhere to reduce my stress at that time.
>>So I skipped studying and went somewhere to reduce my stress at that time.
After that, I came back to school.
>>Correct
My teacher was very angry and he threw the book at me.
>>Correct
He worried about my future but I didn\'t know at that time.
>>He worried about my future but I didn\'t know it at that time.
Anyway, thanks to my teacher, I entered the university easily.
>>Correct
After graduated the university, I got a job and I am working hard in this company.
>>After I graduated from university, I got a job and am working hard in this company.
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