homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Maybe you don\'t have an idea how much time should a student play because you\'re not allowed to do it.
I understand your parents.
Thank you for being a good student [이름].
Good night!
_Teacher Dianne
I don\'t play computer games. Because my parent isn\'t allowed play computer games us.
>> I don\'t play computer games because my parents don\'t allow us to play computer games.
They aren\'t like play computer games us.
>> They don\'t like us to play computer games.
>> or: They don\'t allow us to play computer games.
ps. I heard you stopped power english. Thank you so far.
>> PS: I heard you that you will stop teaching at Power English. Thank you so far. (My pleasure [이름]. ^^)
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