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2018-02-28 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How would you show your weight around? ==> I think there is a misspell in the sentence. The word 'show' is not good at this sentence and maybe 'throw' is more acceptable for this sentence. Is that right? I found the word 'throw' in the example idiom below my homework. Nowadays it is very difficult to throw my weight around the office. If I do like that young people really don't like my attitude. Young people who live today will not understand. Although I am team leader of our team, I have to check my team member's condition and their feeling. It makes me tired and sometimes it makes me angry when they act against me. Because of that, in my company, many people don't like being a team leader.

강사 첨삭

Good morning!

You are absolutely correct, James! That\'s a sharp move! No wonder you are the team leader. Very observant!

Thank for that correction. I truly appreciate it and you even included your experience. That makes it even better. Nice one!

I wish you well, James.

ALL THE BEST!

Enjoy your holiday!

-Klein-

How would you show your weight around?
==>
 I think there is a misspell in the sentence.
>>I think there is a typographical error in the sentence. 

The word \'show\' is not good at this sentence and maybe \'throw\' is more acceptable for this sentence.

>>The word \'show\' is not good for this sentence and maybe \'throw\' is more acceptable.

Is that right?
>>Correct

I found the word \'throw\' in the example idiom below my homework.
>>Correct

Nowadays it is very difficult to throw my weight around the office.
>>Correct

If I do like that young people really don\'t like my attitude.
 
>If I do something like that, young people won\'t really like my attitude.

Young people who live today will not understand.

>>Correct
 Although I am team leader of our team, I have to check my team member\'s condition and their feeling.

>>Although I am the team leader, I have to check my team members\' condition and feeling.
 It makes me tired and sometimes it makes me angry when they act against me.

>>Correct
 Because of that, in my company, many people don\'t like being a team leader.

>>Correct

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