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2018-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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I like making new friends but I don not like it that much. There are many kinds of people. And there are people that have good match for me of bad match for me. I want to make make a friend that has a good match for me.I like making new friends but I don not like it that much. There are many kinds of people. And there are people that have good match for me of bad match for me. I want to make make a friend that has a good match for me.

강사 첨삭

Good evening [이름]!

Thanks for making your homework.

Have fun this weekend!

See you on Monday.

Cheers,

Amanda ^-^

I like making new friends but I do not like it that much.

>> Correct

There are many kinds of people.

>> Correct

And there are people that have good match for me of bad match for me.

>> And there are people who are a good match for me and there are also people who are a bad match for me.

>> OR: And there are people who are a good and a bad match for me.

I want to make make a friend that has a good match for me.I like making new friends but I don not like it that much.

>> I want to make friends with people who are a good match for me. I like making new friends but I do not like it that much.

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