homework :)
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ESSAY:
1. How do you begin and end your day? What is the best part of your day?
=>I begin my day by reading children's newspaper.
And I end my day by washing my face and feet.
I think that the best part of my day is the time in my school.
2. Which do you prefer, online shopping or going to the mall? Explain your answer
=>I prefer to go to the mall because I can try on the clothes.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]
Thanks for doing your homework! Have a nice day ^^
ESSAY:
1. How do you begin and end your day? What is the best part of your day?
=> I begin my day by reading children\'s newspaper.
>> I begin my day by reading a children\'s newspaper.
And I end my day by washing my face and feet.
>> CORRECT
I think that the best part of my day is the time in my school.
>> I think that the best part of my day is my time in school.
2. Which do you prefer, online shopping or going to the mall? Explain your answer
=> I prefer to go to the mall because I can try on the clothes.
>> CORRECT
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