Homework

Hi there [이름]! (~_o)

Long time no see!

Thank you for sharing this. I am glad that you found a new friend.^^

I will see you in class! Have a good day!

I missed your call yesterday. 

>> Correct.
Actuary, I didn’t know that I failed to register for the class. 

>> Actually, I didn’t know that I failed to register for the class. 
I thought standard on Singapore time.

>> I thought it was standard Singapore time.

I realized this problem before taking class 30 minutes ago.

>> I realized it 30 minutes after the class time.
I was looking forward to talk with you. but, I’ve made a stupid situation. 

>> I was looking forward to talking with you, but, I’ve made a stupid situation. 
Anyway, I am going to study hard.

>> Correct.

I hope this class improves my English skill. 

>> I hope this class helps improve my English skill. 
Please correct my sentence.

>> Correct.
I met a new friend. We met at the playground near my house. 

>> Correct.
She is a Filipino and she has a son.

>> Correct.

He is one year older than my son. 

>> Correct.
We had small talk each other. We were a lot alike a lot of ways. 

>> We had a small talk. We are alike in a lot of ways.

I wanted to keep in touch with her.

>> Correct.

Then she first asked me for my phone number.

>> Then she asked for my phone number first.
We decided to schedule a playdate. So, I went to at Bishan with my son yesterday. 

>> We decided to schedule a play date and went to Bishan with my son yesterday. 
There was a group of kids who were playing at the playground. 

>> Correct.
My son also played with them. Although it was hot, my son seemed happy. 

>> Correct.
The kids only played for an hour but all mothers seemed tired already.

>> Correct.