homework

2018-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

I think that life is close to struggling but It also obviously has happieness. I'm believing like that. After living struggly, I will enjoy my life that is interesting. That's one of the why I study English. ps. Can I answer on this board about my assignment ?

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]^^

Sure! This is the board where you can definitely type everything :)

I look forward to seeing your homework, see you~

I think that life is close to struggling but It also obviously has happieness.

>>I think that life is close to struggling, but it also obviously has happiness.
I\'m believing like that.

>>CORRECT!

 After living struggly, I will enjoy my life that is interesting.

>> After living with struggles, I will enjoy my life that is interesting.

 That\'s one of the why I study English.
>>
 That\'s why I study English.
ps. Can I answer on this board about my assignment ?

>>P. S. Can I answer my assignment on this board?



파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·