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2018-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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QUOTE FOR THE DAY: “Obstacles are designed to make you stronger, only the weak avoid them.” Anonymous HOMEWORK: Composition writing! If you had the opportunity to bring any person from the past or present, fictional or nonfictional to a place that is special to you (your hometown or country, a favorite location, etc.), who would you bring and why? I will bring Sherlock homes.Because,he is very smart and i like Sherlock homes.So,I want to bring Sherlock homes.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

Thank you for doing this.

I want to encourage you to write longer essays.

Also, I want tor remind you to always start a proper noun with a capital letter.

See you tomorrow.

~Teacher Shanee^^,


QUOTE FOR THE DAY:
“Obstacles are designed to make you stronger, only the weak avoid them.” Anonymous

HOMEWORK:
Composition writing!
If you had the opportunity to bring any person from the past or present, fictional or nonfictional to a place that is special to you (your hometown or country, a favorite location, etc.), who would you bring and why?

I will bring Sherlock homes.

>>> I will bring Sherlock Holmes.

Because,he is very smart and i like Sherlock homes.

>>> Because he is very smart and I like him.

So,I want to bring Sherlock homes.

>>> I want to bring Sherlock Holmes to my favorite place and share stories with him.

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