Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]BIN!
I am happy that you continue to take my class.
If there is something wrong, feel free to inform me.
If you cannot understand what I am saying, please do not hesitate to raise that in class.
I really hope that you will not just your listening but also all other aspects in English.
See you in class.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
Dear. Teacher Shanee.
>>> Dear Teacher Shanee,
To be honest, I feel hard to hear and understand clearly your saying.
>>> To be honest, I have a hard time hearing and understand what you\'re saying.
I don\'t know what to do for getting high my listening level.
>>> I don\'t know what to do to improve my listening skill.
However, I always look forward to taking class with you.
>>> However, I always look forward to taking the class with you.
See you soon!
Homework :
If I had that opportunity, I would bring my mother or family.
>>> Correct!
When I stay in the United States, I was totally alone.
>>> When I stayed in the United States, I was totally alone.
I lived with my aunt, but she made me more deeply sad and lonely.
>>> I lived with my aunt but she made me more deeply sad or lonely.
When I feel like that every single moment, I thought my family.
>>> When I felt that way, every single moment I thought about my family.
If I am with them who I love in there, the place I stayed would have looked like a just tourist destination.
>>> If I was there with the ones I love, the place where I stayed would have felt like a tourist destination.
I always hoped that happens, but it was never happened.
>>> I always hoped for that to happen but it never did.
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