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2018-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Dear. Teacher Shanee. To be honest, I feel hard to hear and understand clearly your saying. I don't know what to do for getting high my listening level. However, I always look forward to taking class with you. See you soon! Homework : If I had that opportunity, I would bring my mother or family. When I stay in the United States, I was totally alone. I lived with my aunt, but she made me more deeply sad and lonely. When I feel like that every single moment, I thought my family. If I am with them who I love in there, the place I stayed would have looked like a just tourist destination. I always hoped that happens, but it was never happened.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]BIN!

I am happy that you continue to take my class.

If there is something wrong, feel free to inform me.

If you cannot understand what I am saying, please do not hesitate to raise that in class.

I really hope that you will not just your listening but also all other aspects in English.

See you in class.

~Teacher Shanee^^,


Dear. Teacher Shanee.

>>> Dear Teacher Shanee,
To be honest, I feel hard to hear and understand clearly your saying.

>>> To be honest, I have a hard time hearing and understand what you\'re saying.
I don\'t know what to do for getting high my listening level.

>>> I don\'t know what to do to improve my listening skill.
However, I always look forward to taking class with you.

>>> However, I always look forward to taking the class with you.
See you soon!

Homework :
If I had that opportunity, I would bring my mother or family.

>>> Correct!

When I stay in the United States, I was totally alone.

>>> When I stayed in the United States, I was totally alone.

I lived with my aunt, but she made me more deeply sad and lonely.

>>> I lived with my aunt but she made me more deeply sad or lonely.

When I feel like that every single moment, I thought my family.

>>> When I felt that way, every single moment I thought about my family.

If I am with them who I love in there, the place I stayed would have looked like a just tourist destination.

>>> If I was there with the ones I love, the place where I stayed would have felt like a tourist destination.

I always hoped that happens, but it was never happened.

>>> I always hoped for that to happen but it never did.

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