homework
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강사 첨삭
Hi Kelvin
Thank you for doing your assignment
I also love watching Movies
and one of my favorite English films is
Pirates of the Caribbean.
Keep up the good work. ^^
Teacher Brian
I like watching to movie.
>> I like watching movies.
My favorite movie is \'Big Hero\',\'Inside Out\',\'turbo\',\'Boss Baby\',\'Jutopia\',\'Iron Man\',\'Hark\',\'Thor\',and so on.
>> My favorite movies are Big hero, Inside out, Turbo, Boss Baby, Jutopia, Iron Man, Hark, Thor and so on,
I like an animation movies and action movies.
>> I also like animated and action movies.
And I like playing basketball with my friends.although I\'m not good at basketball, but it\'s very interesting.
>> I also like playing Basketball with my friends, although I am not good at playing Basketball I enjoy playing because I find it very interesting,
But I hurt fingers four times during playing basketball.I am as good as my friends.Iwant a match with my friends.I will win the match.
>> I hurt my fingers for four times while playing Basketball, I am as good as my friends and I want to have a match with them and when that time comes I will make sure that I will win the game.
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