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2018-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Brian

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Ilike watching to movie. My favorite movie is 'Big Hero','Inside Out','turbo','Boss Baby','Jutopia','Iron Man','Hark','Thor',and so on. I like an animation movies and action movies. And I like playing basketball with my friends.although I'm not good at basketball, but it's very interesting.But I hurt fingers four times during playing basketball.I am as good as my friends.Iwant a match with my friends.I will win the match.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kelvin

Thank you for doing your assignment
I also love watching Movies
and one of my favorite English films is

Pirates of the Caribbean.

Keep up the good work. ^^


Teacher Brian



I like watching to movie.

>> I like watching movies.

My favorite movie is \'Big Hero\',\'Inside Out\',\'turbo\',\'Boss Baby\',\'Jutopia\',\'Iron Man\',\'Hark\',\'Thor\',and so on.

>> My favorite movies are Big hero, Inside out, Turbo, Boss Baby, Jutopia, Iron Man, Hark, Thor and so on,
 I like an animation movies and action movies.

>> I also like animated and action movies.
And I like playing basketball with my friends.although I\'m not good at basketball, but it\'s very interesting.

>> I  also  like playing Basketball with my friends, although I am not good at playing Basketball I enjoy playing because I find it very interesting,

But I hurt fingers four times during playing basketball.I am as good as my friends.Iwant a match with my friends.I will win the match.

>> I hurt my fingers for four times while playing Basketball, I am as good as my friends and I want to have a match with them and when that time comes I will make sure that I will win the game.




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