Homework

Hi Seong Won!

Thank you for sharing your story.

It was really interesting.

I hope to hear more stories for you.

Good job!

~~ Teacher Sharon

When I was 11, I was traveling Western Europe with my family and family on my mom\'s side.
>> When I was 11, I was traveling in Western Europe with my family and relatives from my Mom\'s side.
my cousin was 15 years older than me.
>> My cousin was 15 years older than me.
When me and my mom was preparing for sleep, my cousin came and gave me a teddy bear.
>> When my Mom and I were preparing for to go to sleep, my cousin came and gave me a teddy bear.
I named him Eyanggom.
>> Correct
It was my best birthday memory I have.
>> It\'s the best birthday memory I have.
...Or the best present?
>> It could also be the best present.
Well, to me, The best presesnt=The best memory.

>> Well for me, the best present is also the best memory.