homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your expectations.
I\'ll keep them in mind.
Please take note of the suggestions below.
Thank you for your composition!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
First of all, The most important thing i though is atmosphere to be funny
>> First of all, the most important thing for me is a fun learning environment.
please correct me just in a big mistakes, in other words, other mistakes let show me on the website.
>> I want to get the corrections for some major mistakes but I could just check the website for the simple ones.
Actually, i want to concentrate on the situation like do on business. not like a book.
>> I want to concentrate on how to express myself in a professional setting.
so sometimes let me know how to express the sentences about certain situation when i have a question.
>> Sometimes, let me know some alternative expressions whenever I have a question.
also it\'s really funny to share our normal life.
>> It would also be fun to talk about our daily lives.
That\'s all. Thanks for your kindness and I am hoping to have a great time with you including some lessons.
>> That\'s all. Thanks for your kindness and I am hoping to have a great time with you and also learn a lot from you.
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