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2018-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Brian

학생이 쓴 원문

Ican see many kinds of animals.I can see cows,pigs,chickens,ducks,goose,dogs,cats,and so on.I love a farm, because I can see many kinds of the animals in a farm.also the grain that I like grows in a farm. I like playing with animals.Animals in a farm are very mild.So I can go near.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kelvin,
Thank You for doing your assignment
I also love animals My favorite is a horse.
Good Job!


Teacher Brian,


I can see many kinds of animals.
>>I can see different kinds of animals in a farm

I can see cows, pigs, chickens, ducks, goose, dogs, cats, and so on.
>>I can see different kinds of animals in a farm for example cows, pigs, chickens, ducks, goose, dogs, cats and so on.

I love a farm, because I can see many kinds of the animals in a farm.
>>I love to go to a farm because I will be able to see different kinds of animals.

also the grain that I like grows in a farm.
>>also the grain that I like grows in a farm,

I like playing with animals. Animals in a farm are very mild. So I can go near.
>>I also like playing with animals in the farm because they are not harmful so I can go near them.


 

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