homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Kelvin,
Thank You for doing your assignment
I also love animals My favorite is a horse.
Good Job!
Teacher Brian,
I can see many kinds of animals.
>>I can see different kinds of animals in a farm
I can see cows, pigs, chickens, ducks, goose, dogs, cats, and so on.
>>I can see different kinds of animals in a farm for example cows, pigs, chickens, ducks, goose, dogs, cats and so on.
I love a farm, because I can see many kinds of the animals in a farm.
>>I love to go to a farm because I will be able to see different kinds of animals.
also the grain that I like grows in a farm.
>>also the grain that I like grows in a farm,
I like playing with animals. Animals in a farm are very mild. So I can go near.
>>I also like playing with animals in the farm because they are not harmful so I can go near them.
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