Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
It\'s interesting to read what you like about Everland.
It really shows your fun personality.
Keep it up!
I\'ll talk to you later!
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think it is Everland.
>> Correct
Well, I never went to amusement park except for the Everland.
>> Well, I have never been to any amusement park except Everland.
Anyway, Everland was very excellent.
>> Anyway, Everland is excellent.
T-Express was the best ride ever.
>> T-Express is the best ride ever.
However...the goods was a little bit expensive.
>> However, the goods sold there are a little bit expensive.
except that, everything was perfect.
>> Aside from that, everything is perfect.
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