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2018-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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HOMEWORK: Composition writing! In not more than ten sentences discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others. I was watch news first,when I was six years old.I understand of others.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for sending this [이름].

I just hope that you\'ll explain a little further next time.

See you tomorrow in class.

~Teacher Shanee^^,


HOMEWORK:
Composition writing!
In not more than ten sentences discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others.

I was watch news first,when I was six years old.I understand of others.


Correction:

I watched news for the first time when I was six years old. That experience made me understand others.

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