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2018-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I think I have a enough free time. I have a time for to read books, draw pictures and play with my friends. Except that, I still have a little time to rest. On that time, I sit down and just look blank. And that is the reason that I think I have a enough free time.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

I hope you enjoy your free time this weekend.

Always take care of yourself.

Keep your compositions coming!

~~ Teacher Sharon

I think I have a enough free time.

>> I think I have enough free time.
I have a time for to read books, draw pictures and play with my friends.
>> I have time to read books, draw pictures and play with my friends.
Except that, I still have a little time to rest.
>> Also, I still have a little time left to rest.
On that time, I sit down and just look blank.
>> During this time, I sit down and stare into space.
And that is the reason that I think I have a enough free time.

>> And that is the reason why I think I have enough free time.

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