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I usually don't think if we are more dependent or not.
I don't know the current trend how to flow.
well..
If some people are overreliance, they can't do anything themselves.
The other way, if others have a strong independent tendency,they will be very hard to live alone.
Finally, I think that people had better keep the middle than slant one way.
That is my opinion.
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Thank you for doing your homework, [이름]^^
I think the society is changing fast~
It can be a positive thing, but we must not forget it negative repercussions, too^^
I usually don\'t think if we are more dependent or not.
>>CORRECT!
I don\'t know the current trend how to flow.
I don\'t know the current trend how to flow.
>>I don\'t know how the current trend flows.
well..
well..
>>Well.
If some people are overreliance, they can\'t do anything themselves.
If some people are overreliance, they can\'t do anything themselves.
>>If some people are overdependent, they can\'t do anything themselves.
The other way, if others have a strong independent tendency,they will be very hard to live alone.
The other way, if others have a strong independent tendency,they will be very hard to live alone.
>>The other way, if others have a strong independent tendency, it will be very hard for them to live alone.
Finally, I think that people had better keep the middle than slant one way.
Finally, I think that people had better keep the middle than slant one way.
>>Finally, I think that people had better keep themselves in the middle rather than living in a slant, one way.
That is my opinion.
That is my opinion.
>>CORRECT!
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