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2018-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Brian

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[my weakness] My weakness is that I should have a clear direction on my work. Otherwise, I am less confident in doing my assignment. not to down my comfidence and working correctly, I usually communicated too much with my customer when I working as an consultant. However, time is not much allowed. so I made a habit a checklist to communicate with my customers or coworker. [hard experience when I working] It is connected with my weakness. I had a difficulty when I had a not clear direction on the project. It was my first project in the consulting company to make a menual about the emmmision trading system. However my coworker or my superior had no idea about the menual. so I couldn't get the right direction. I revised a menual so many times even in a weekend for 3months. It was the most hardest day in my working time. I think, It occured customer and we didn't talk about the direction of menual.

강사 첨삭

Hi Jin,
Thank You for doing your assignment
It\'s okay to have weaknesses but it\'s better if

how learn how to make them your strengths
Good Job!

Teacher Brian,


My weakness is that I should have a clear direction on my work.

>>My weakness is that I should have a clear direction on my work.

Otherwise, I am less confident in doing my assignment.

>>Otherwise, I am less confident in doing my tasks
not to down my comfidence and working correctly, I usually communicated too much with my customer when I working as an consultant.

>>and won\'t be able to do my job properly, I usually communicate too much with my customer when I am working as a consultant
However, time is not much allowed. so I made a habit a checklist to communicate with my customers or coworker.
>>However, time is limited so I develop a Habit to communicate with a specific time span with my customers or co workers.
[hard experience when I working]
>>[hard experience when I working]
It is connected with my weakness. I had a difficulty when I had a not clear direction on the project.

>>It is connected with my weakness but I had a difficulty when I don\'t have a clear direction on the project.
It was my first project in the consulting company to make a menual about the emmmision trading system.

>>It was my first project in the consulting company to make a manual about the emmmision trading system,
However my coworker or my superior had no idea about the menual. so I couldn\'t get the right direction. 

>>However my coworker or my superior had no idea about the manual so I couldn\'t get the right direction.
I revised a menual so many times even in a weekend for 3months. It was the most hardest day in my working time.

>>I revised the manual a couple of times even during the weekend for 3 consecutive months.
I think, It occurred customer and we didn\'t talk about the direction of manual.

>>It was the hardest part during my work time. I think It occured to the customer because we didn\'t talk about the direction of manual.




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