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Body language is obviously important to know human being\'s emotion when someone have a conversation.

>> Body language is obviously important to know a human being\'s emotion when he or she is engaged in a conversation.

As far as I know, It is different kind of language even if it doesn\'t have a sound.

>> As far as I know, it is a different kind of language even if it doesn\'t have a sound.
When it comes to my experience, I have been working for a year in the overseas sales deparment.

>>When it comes to my experience, I have been working in an overseas sales department for a year.

Whenever I had discussed with foreign buyer directly, there weren\'t any problems with them.

>> Whenever I had discussed with foreign buyers directly, there weren\'t any problems with them.

But in case of phone call, It was absolutely difficult to understand what they said.

>> But in case of phone call, it was absolutely difficult to understand what they said.
In fact, I realized that a certain language is not important when we travel in many countries.

>> In fact, I realized that a certain language is not important when we travel in different countries.

Not only they already know we are not a native, but also we have body language that help our skills.

>> Not only do they already know that we are not native speakers of English, but also we have body language that help our skills. 
Recently, I met many foreign buyer from the east asia.

>> Recently, I have met many foreign buyers from the East Asia. 
actually it is so difficult to listen. but we have body language and I already got over the wall of langauge.

> Actually it is so difficult to listen but we have body language and I already got over language barriers.