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2018-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I think fruits and vegetables are good for my health. They have vitamins which are very good for the health. For example, tangerine have a lot of vitamin C, which is very good for the tiredness. Also, it's good for diabets, hypertension, and digestion. So thats the reasons that I think fruits and vegetables are good for the health.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

Good job today!

Keep the compositions coming!

Please practice the corrections below.

I\'ll talk to you in class!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I think fruits and vegetables are good for my health.
>> Correct
They have vitamins which are very good for the health.
>> They have vitamins which are very good for health.
For example, tangerine have a lot of vitamin C, which is very good for the tiredness.
>> For example, tangerines have a lot of Vitamin C, which is very good for treating fatigue.
Also, it\'s good for diabets, hypertension, and digestion.

>> Also, it\'s good in preventing diabetes, hypertension, and digestion.
So thats the reasons that I think fruits and vegetables are good for the health.

>> So these are the reasons why I think fruits and vegetables are good for health.

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