homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I can feed the animals.the animals will like their food. I can water the plants or the crops.I can harvest the crops like rice,beans, and corn.I like it very much.Because it's very delicious.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kelvin,
Thank you for doing your assignment
I have my own garden way back home
I wish one day I can show it you.
Good work Buddy
Teacher Brian,
I can feed the animals.the animals will like their food.
>>I can feed the animals and I will make sure that they will like their food.
I can water the plants or the crops.
>>I can water the plants or the crops
I can harvest the crops like rice,beans, and corn.
>>also I can harvest the different kinds of crops like rice,beans, and corn.
I like it very much.Because it\'s very delicious.
>>I like it very much Because it\'s very delicious.
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