Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there Sir Will!
Yes, nothing can compare to the happiness you can feel if we can help someone reach their dreams. You are a kind-hearted man who is willing to give a helping hand to those in need. Have a great day ahead!
~T. Eunice
Hello! Let`s laugh and start the day!
>> Hello! Let\'s smile and start the day!
I wanted to get out of the stress.
>> I wanted to get rid of my stress.
So I went to western pub last night.
>> So I went to a western pub last night.
When I am stressed I did know what to do.
>> I know what to do when I am under stressed.
I just drink some liqures and I get rid of any stress but I might have hang over next day.
>> I just drink some liquor and get rid of any stress but I might have a hang over the next day.
The vicious circle is always repeated.
>> Correct!
>> This dangerous habit can be done repeatedly.
I haven`t been helped anyone but I really want to help as teacher someone who wants to get electric licence to get a good jop in Korea if I can.
>> I haven`t helped anyone but I really want to help as a teacher to someone who wants to be a licensed electric engineer to get a good job in Korea if I can.
Because, it is difficult to learn and get its licence, especially it might spend a lot of money and time.
>> Because, it is difficult to learn and get a license, especially you might spend a lot of money and time.
So it would be helpful if I could help someone to get a certificate.
>> Correct!
In other words, I want to donate my talent.
>> In other words, I want to share my talent.
Have a great day!
>> Correct!
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