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2018-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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Hello! Let`s laugh and start the day! I wanted to get out of the stress. So I went to western pub last night. When I am stressed I did know what to do. I just drink some liqures and I get rid of any stress but I might have hang over next day. The vicious circle is always repeated. I haven`t been helped anyone but I really want to help as teacher someone who wants to get electric licence to get a good jop in Korea if I can. Because, it is difficult to learn and get its licence, especially it might spend a lot of money and time. So it would be helpful if I could help someone to get a certificate. In other words, I want to donate my talent. Have a great day!

강사 첨삭

Hello there Sir Will!

Yes, nothing can compare to the happiness you can feel if we can help someone reach their dreams. You are a kind-hearted man who is willing to give a helping hand to those in need. Have a great day ahead!

~T. Eunice


Hello! Let`s laugh and start the day!

>> Hello! Let\'s smile and start the day!

I wanted to get out of the stress.

>> I wanted to get rid of my stress.

So I went to western pub last night.

>> So I went to a western pub last night.

When I am stressed I did know what to do.

>> I know what to do when I am under stressed.

I just drink some liqures and I get rid of any stress but I might have hang over next day.

>> I just drink some liquor and get rid of any stress but I might have a hang over the next day.

The vicious circle is always repeated.

>> Correct!

>> This dangerous habit can be done repeatedly.

I haven`t been helped anyone but I really want to help as teacher someone who wants to get electric licence to get a good jop in Korea if I can.

>> I haven`t helped anyone but I really want to help as a teacher to someone who wants to be a licensed electric engineer to get a good job in Korea if I can.

Because, it is difficult to learn and get its licence, especially it might spend a lot of money and time.

>> Because, it is difficult to learn and get a license, especially you might spend a lot of money and time.

So it would be helpful if I could help someone to get a certificate.

>> Correct!

In other words, I want to donate my talent.

>> In other words, I want to share my talent.

Have a great day!

>> Correct! 

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