homework
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HOMEWORK:
Composition writing!
Tell me about a place you like visiting, and describe what it meant to you then and why.
I like visiting school.Because,I can play ith my friends in my school.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thanks for writing this. I just hoped you could have written something longer. See you tomorrow.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
HOMEWORK:
Composition writing!
Tell me about a place you like visiting, and describe what it meant to you then and why.
I like visiting school.Because,I can play ith my friends in my school.
>>> I like visiting my school because I can play with the friends there.
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