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2018-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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Tell me about some interesting things that you have encountered. Write at least 5 sentences. ========================================================================= There are many interesting books that I have encounter. Some of them are about history and science. Especially I like the book about cats because there were a lot of things that I didn't know. After I read the book, I wanted to raise a cat. But I gave it up because my family didn't allow me to raise it. Have a nice day~!^^

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! You don\'t know how happy you made me by answering your homework! Thank you for sharing your opinion! Now, I need you to be careful about your tenses and always remember to not begin your sentences in conjunctions. It\'s almost perfect! You\'re amazing! ^^

There are many interesting books that I have encounter.

>> There are many interesting books that I have encountered.

Some of them are about history and science.

>>CORRECT

Especially I like the book about cats because there were a lot of things that I didn\'t know.

>> Most especially the book about cats because there were a lot of things that I didn\'t know about them.

After I read the book, I wanted to raise a cat.

>> After reading the book, I suddenly wanted to raise a cat.

But I gave it up because my family didn\'t allow me to raise it.

>> However, I gave it up because my family didn\'t allow me to raise one.

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