homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I like skating,make a snowman,snowfight,ride a sled, and so on.Ilike to ride sled most.Because it's very fun.But if it doesn't snow,I can't ride a sled.
강사 첨삭
Hi kelvin,
Thank You for doing your assignment
I wish to experience winter season in the Future
Lucky you are you have Winter In Korea.
Good Job!
Teacher Brian,
I like skating,make a snowman,snowfight,ride a sled, and so on.
>>I like skating,making a snowman, snow fight, riding a sled and so on.
I like to ride sled most.
>>But riding a sled is my favorite
Because it\'s very fun.But if it doesn\'t snow,I can\'t ride a sled.
>>Because it\'s very fun But I can only ride a sled during winter season.
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