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2018-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

My friend and I met when we were 11. My friend is good at drawing pictures. She likes Harry Potter like me,but she doesn't know about it well. Also, she likes watching movies. And lastly, she always likes watching webtoon.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

Thank you for telling me about your friend.

You have made some good sentences here.

Keep it up!

~~ Teacher Sharon

My friend and I met when we were 11.
>> Correct
My friend is good at drawing pictures.
>> Correct
She likes Harry Potter like me,but she doesn\'t know about it well.
>> She likes Harry Potter like me,but she doesn\'t know a lot about it.
Also, she likes watching movies.
>> Correct
And lastly, she always likes watching webtoon.

>> And lastly, she always likes watching webtoons.

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