homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Sir Will!
Thank you for sending this heart-warming message out of your busy schedule. My day isn\'t complete if I\'m not able to talk to you. hahaha Please enjoy the rest of the day and make the best out of it. See you around!
~T. Eunice
Hello, I was really good to hear your voice again.
>> Hello, It was really good to hear your voice again.
I`ve been enjoying my class since meeting you.
>> I`ve been enjoying my class since I met you.
If my kids are rude to someone, I will talk about what`s wrong him as their parent and they must write a reflection about it.
>> If my kids are rude to someone, I will talk about what`s wrong with them and as their parent and they must write a reflection about it.
Beside, I`ll ask them to apologize as well.
>> Besides, I`ll ask them to apologize as well.
One of the most important things is not rude myself to someone.
>> One of the most important things is for me not to rude to someone.
>> OR: The most important thing for me is not to hurt someone\'s feeling.
Have a nice day, teacher Eunice.
>> Have a nice day, Teacher Eunice.
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