Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
You did a good job in describing your library.
Read more English books.
This will help you in your classes.
I\'ll talk to you tomorrow!
~~ Teacher Sharon
My school\'s best part is that our school\'s library is very good.
>> The library is the best part of my school.
There are lot\'s of books that I can read.
>> There are lots of books that I can read.
When I was an elementary school student, most of the books in the school library was a fairytale so I had to made a difficult decision to choos books.
>> When I was an elementary school student, most of the books in the school library were fairy tales so it was difficult for me to choose books.
Now, in middle school, I just have to read anything that I want to read.
>> Now that I\'m in Middle school, I can read anything that I want to read.
The most of the books are very interesting, so I don\'t have to make a defficult decision to choose books.
>> Most of the books are very interesting, so I don\'t have a hard time in choosing books.
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