Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there Sir Will!
It\'s raining cats and dogs today. I guess weather is really unpredictable. I hope you\'re heaving a great day, see you around!
~T. Eunice
Hi, it`s raining and all of sounds are so beautiful.
>> Hi, it`s raining and all sounds are so beautiful.
>> OR: Hi, it`s raining and it all sounds beautiful.
I want to feel you these sounds.
>> I want you to hear this sound.
It`s a perfect that I have been getting a free welfare of my local health ststem since when I was born.
>> It`s perfect that I have been getting a free welfare from my local health system since when I was born.
I even can get a medical check up once a year and they send a letter to someone who are coming an exam period as well.
>> I can even get a medical check up once a year and they also send a letter to someone who are coming for an examination period as well.
It has saved medical budget and reduced personal costs. Enjoy your day.
>> It has saved my medical budget and reduced personal costs.
Enjoy your day.
>> Correct!
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