Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
I like the way you put your personal experience in the topic.
Continue writing so well.
Be careful with your spelling and punctuation marks.
I\'ll talk to you tomorrow!
~~ Teacher Sharon
Well, some of tham can have a allergy, so they don\'t like pets.
>> Some people may have allergies so they don\'t like to have pets.
Or just do not like animals.
>> Maybe, they just don\'t like animals.
Maybe, thay don\'t like the animals bouncing around(Like cats and dogs.).
>> Maybe, they don\'t like animals moving around the house like cats and dogs.
Or fill gross at there appearance.
>> Some people might even feel uncomfortable with their appearance.
It can be both like my mom.
>> This is the way my mom feels too.
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