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2018-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Well, some of tham can have a allergy, so they don't like pets. Or just do not like animals. Maybe, thay don't like the animals bouncing around(Like cats and dogs.). Or fill gross at there appearance. It can be both like my mom.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

I like the way you put your personal experience in the topic.

Continue writing so well.

Be careful with your spelling and punctuation marks.

I\'ll talk to you tomorrow!

~~ Teacher Sharon

Well, some of tham can have a allergy, so they don\'t like pets.
>> Some people may have allergies so they don\'t like to have pets.
Or just do not like animals.
>> Maybe, they just don\'t like animals.
Maybe, thay don\'t like the animals bouncing around(Like cats and dogs.).
>> Maybe, they don\'t like animals moving around the house like cats and dogs.
Or fill gross at there appearance.
>> Some people might even feel uncomfortable with their appearance.
It can be both like my mom.

>> This is the way my mom feels too.

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