Homework
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I don't want to be famous.
If I become famous, it will be too tired.
Well, if nobody know my face and just know my name, that will be okay.
But if my face become known, I will just stuck in my room to avoid the attention.
I don't want a lot of attention.
강사 첨삭
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~~ Teacher Sharon
I don\'t want to be famous.
>> Correct
If I become famous, it will be too tired.
>> If I become famous, it will be too tiring.
Well, if nobody know my face and just know my name, that will be okay.
>> Well, if nobody knows my face and they just know my name, that will be okay.
But if my face become known, I will just stuck in my room to avoid the attention.
>> But if my face becomes well-known, I will just be stuck in my room to avoid attention.
I don\'t want a lot of attention.
>> Correct
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