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I like to see flowers.they are very beautiful and smell good.Also I like to take pictures with flowers.I expect to come spring.Because my favorite season is spring and fall.
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Hi kelvin,
Thank You for doing your assignment
My favorite flower is a red rose with long stem.
Good Job!
Teacher Brian,
I like to see flowers.
>>I like to see flowers this weekend
they are very beautiful and smell good.
>>because they are very beautiful and smells good
Also I like to take pictures with flowers.
>>Also I like to take pictures of flowers.
I expect to come spring.Because my favorite season is spring and fall.
>>I expect spring season to come early this year Because spring and fall seasons are my favorite.
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