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2018-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Brian

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I will playing basketball with my friends on Saturday.And I will eat chicken and pizza.On Sunday, I will do my homework and hang out my brother.Also I will play smart phone game.I will have a wonderful weekend.

강사 첨삭

Hi kelvin,
Thank You for doing your assignment
I also love playing basketball
I hope we can play together in the future ^^
Good Job!



Teacher Brian,



I will playing basketball with my friends on Saturday.

>>I will be playing basketball with my friends this co[이름]g Saturday

And I will eat chicken and pizza.

>>and on Sunday I will be eating chicken and pizza

On Sunday, I will do my homework and hang out my brother.

>>also I will be doing my homework and I will be spending time with my brother

Also I will play smart phone game.I will have a wonderful weekend.

>>and lastly I will be playing games in my smartphone, and because of that I will have a wonderful weekend.



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