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Do traffic jams often occur in your hometown or in the city where you live?
Yes. It happens often. I live in a big city, and this city has huge population. And many people in this city prefer to use their own car. So, traffic jams happens very often. Korean goverment has been trying to make it less by build regulations, but I don't think it works well.
What changes in transportation have taken place in the past several years in your country?
In Korea, people use bicycle more than before. I think, nowadays, they are interested in their health. So, many people use bicycle as a transportation or a hobby. In my case, sometimes I take a bicycle when I go to the office.
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Do traffic jams often occur in your hometown or in the city where you live?
Yes. It happens often.
Do traffic jams often occur in your hometown or in the city where you live?
Yes. It happens often.
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I live in a big city, and this city has huge population.
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And many people in this city prefer to use their own car.
>>Many people in this city prefer to use their own car.
So, traffic jams happens very often.
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Korean goverment has been trying to make it less by build regulations, but I don\'t think it works well.
>>The Korean government has been trying to lessen the problem about traffic jams by implementing some regulations but I think it\'s not working well.
What changes in transportation have taken place in the past several years in your country?
In Korea, people use bicycle more than before.
>>The Korean government has been trying to lessen the problem about traffic jams by implementing some regulations but I think it\'s not working well.
What changes in transportation have taken place in the past several years in your country?
In Korea, people use bicycle more than before.
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I think, nowadays, they are interested in their health.
>>Nowadays, I think they are more concerned with their health.
So, many people use bicycle as a transportation or a hobby.
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In my case, sometimes I take a bicycle when I go to the office.
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