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I drink fruit juice once a month.
And when I drink it, I drink apple
& carrot juice.
My mom grind carrots in the apple juice and give it to me.
It tasts really good.
But sometimes, I just want my mom to give me un-mixed apple juice.
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Hi Seong Won!
You are a very diligent student.
You never miss a composition.
Keep up the good work!
~~ Teacher Sharon
I drink fruit juice once a month.
>> Correct
And when I drink it, I drink apple & carrot juice.
>> I like drinking apple and carrot juice.
My mom grind carrots in the apple juice and give it to me.
>> My mom grinds carrots and mix it with apple juice and then gives it to me.
It tasts really good.
>> It tastes really good.
But sometimes, I just want my mom to give me un-mixed apple juice.
>> But sometimes, I prefer to drink only apple juice with nothing mixed in it.
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